Editing Other Student's Work - Critical Review

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Why Scientists Are Annoyed

Commercial journal needs more attention as the money may not be ploughed back into science or education, but the shareholders.

(Open access: The true cost of science publishing on Nature, 2013)

Editing - HBR - Syntax

Subject + decide + not + to + verb

By applying the aforementioned formula, the sentence should be, "You decide not to say anything ..."
Where possible, according to English traditional grammar, keep the 'to' next to the 'verb' to avoid split infinitive.

Reference:

“I Decided Not to Continue/I Decided to Not to Continue.” Word Reference. vBulletin Solutions, Inc. 18 Feb. 2007. Web. 31 Mar. 2013.
“To Decide Not to Do or Have Something.” Macmillan Dictionary. Macmillan Publishers Limited. n.d. Web. 31 Mar. 2013.
“Deciding Not to Decide Gay Marriage.” New York Times, the. Arthur Ochs Sulzberger, Jr. 25 Mar. 2013. Web. 31 Mar. 2013.

Bill Gates' Sexist Quote, "Neutralized"

Content is king.
Content is queen.
Content is queer.

Proofreading - Huffington Post - Capitalization